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 1959 JEFFERSON NICKEL HIGHER GRADE 55 STEPS GEM QUALITY AWESOME $0.99 (1 Bid) Time Remaining: 15h 36m |
 1921 s Morgan silver dollar Gem BU nice high grade $299.00 Time Remaining: 16h 27m Buy It Now for only: $299.00 |
 1925 1 PEACE DOLLAR SILVER COIN PCGS MS 65 GEM HIGH GRADE WHOLESALE LOT CHEAP $169.99 Time Remaining: 18h 4m |
 1954 NGC PF65 Franklin Half Dollar High Grade Low Mintage Gem $59.95 Time Remaining: 19h 49m Buy It Now for only: $99.95 |
 1902 US MORGAN SILVER DOLLARVERY HIGH GRADEMS++++PQGEM QUALITY $21.50 (2 Bids) Time Remaining: 22h 22m |
 20 GEM BU UNCIRCULATED PRE 1921 MIXED MORGAN SILVER DOLLAR ROLL WILL GRADE OUT $1,225.00 Time Remaining: 1d 5h 49m Buy It Now for only: $1,225.00 |
 1883 O MORGAN SILVER DOLLAR GEM BU DMPL LK HIGH GRADE BETTER DATE $43.88 (6 Bids) Time Remaining: 1d 14h 45m |
 1904 P MORGAN SILVER DOLLAR RARE GEM BU TOUGH KEY DATE TOP GRADE LOW MINTAGE $0.99 (2 Bids) Time Remaining: 1d 16h 52m |
 1934 Washington Quarter Silver Super HIGHER GRADE GEM BU AWESOME $64.99 Time Remaining: 1d 17h 4m |
 1921 Silver Morgan Gem BU Toned High Grade Coin $50.00 Time Remaining: 1d 19h 21m |
 1962 NGC PF68 NICKEL PROOF 68 HIGH GRADE NGC GEM $23.98 Time Remaining: 1d 23h 1m Buy It Now for only: $23.98 |
 20 GEM BU UNCIRCULATED PRE 1921 MIXED MORGAN SILVER DOLLAR ROLL WILL GRADE OUT $1,399.00 Time Remaining: 2d 5h 51m Buy It Now for only: $1,399.00 |
 1922 D PEACE DOLLAR GEM CHOICE UNCIRCULATED HIGH MS GRADE SEE SCANS JJ557 $130.00 Time Remaining: 2d 18h 28m |
 1922 S PEACE DOLLAR GEM CHOICE UNCIRCULATED HIGH MS GRADE SEE SCANS JJ558 $130.00 Time Remaining: 2d 18h 37m |
 2000 D GEM BU SACAGAWEA DOLLAR SINGLE High Grade $2.95 Time Remaining: 3d 18h 25m Buy It Now for only: $2.95 |
 2001 D GEM BU SACAGAWEA DOLLAR SINGLE High Grade $4.25 Time Remaining: 3d 18h 33m Buy It Now for only: $4.25 |
 2002 D GEM BU SACAGAWEA DOLLAR SINGLE High Grade $3.95 Time Remaining: 3d 18h 38m Buy It Now for only: $3.95 |
 2003 D GEM BU SACAGAWEA DOLLAR SINGLE High Grade $8.00 Time Remaining: 3d 18h 40m Buy It Now for only: $8.00 |
 2004 D GEM BU SACAGAWEA DOLLAR SINGLE High Grade $8.00 Time Remaining: 3d 19h Buy It Now for only: $8.00 |
 2005 D GEM BU SACAGAWEA DOLLAR SINGLE High Grade $5.25 Time Remaining: 3d 19h 39m Buy It Now for only: $5.25 |
 2009 D GEM BU SACAGAWEA DOLLAR SINGLE High Grade $3.75 Time Remaining: 3d 19h 42m Buy It Now for only: $3.75 |
 2010 P GEM BU SACAGAWEA DOLLAR SINGLE High Grade $4.00 Time Remaining: 3d 19h 45m Buy It Now for only: $4.00 |
 2000 P GEM BU SACAGAWEA DOLLAR SINGLE High Grade $2.95 Time Remaining: 3d 19h 48m Buy It Now for only: $2.95 |
 2001 P GEM BU SACAGAWEA DOLLAR SINGLE High Grade $3.95 Time Remaining: 3d 19h 54m Buy It Now for only: $3.95 |
 2002 P GEM BU SACAGAWEA DOLLAR SINGLE High Grade $4.75 Time Remaining: 3d 19h 56m Buy It Now for only: $4.75 |
 2003 P GEM BU SACAGAWEA DOLLAR High Grade Single $8.25 Time Remaining: 3d 19h 58m Buy It Now for only: $8.25 |
 2004 P GEM BU SACAGAWEA DOLLAR High Grade $8.00 Time Remaining: 3d 20h 20m Buy It Now for only: $8.00 |
 2005 P GEM BU SACAGAWEA DOLLAR SINGLE High Grade $5.25 Time Remaining: 3d 20h 23m Buy It Now for only: $5.25 |
 1980 P GEM BU SBA DOLLAR High Grade $3.75 Time Remaining: 4d 18h 12m Buy It Now for only: $3.75 |
 1999 P GEM BU SBA DOLLAR High Grade $3.75 Time Remaining: 5d 55m Buy It Now for only: $3.75 |
 1885 Morgan silver dollar Gem BU photo grade blast wht $175.00 Time Remaining: 5d 8h 13m Buy It Now for only: $175.00 |
 1904 O MORGAN SILVER DOLLAR GEM BU SPL PQ BEAUTY OLD GEM BU ROLL High Grade $169.00 Time Remaining: 5d 8h 42m Buy It Now for only: $169.00 |
 BEAUTIFUL1922 PEACE SILVER DOLLAR GRADING GEM BU J86 $60.00 Time Remaining: 5d 13h 46m Buy It Now for only: $60.00 |
 BEAUTIFUL1922 PEACE SILVER DOLLAR GRADING GEM BU J87 $60.00 Time Remaining: 5d 13h 47m Buy It Now for only: $60.00 |
 1898 P MORGAN SILVER DOLLAR GEM HIGH GRADE UNC 6705118 $289.00 Time Remaining: 5d 18h 54m Buy It Now for only: $289.00 |
 1972 S SILVER GEM BU EISENHOWER DOLLAR HIGH GRADE $22.00 Time Remaining: 5d 19h 49m Buy It Now for only: $22.00 |
 1973 D GEM BU EISENHOWER DOLLAR High Grade Singles $14.00 Time Remaining: 5d 20h 14m Buy It Now for only: $14.00 |
 1881 PL S MORGAN MS++very HIGH INVESTMENT GRADE 6 GEM 5 $95.00 Time Remaining: 6d 4h 37m Buy It Now for only: $95.00 |
 Impressive Blast White 1935 Peace Dollar Grading GEM BU Last Year of Issue $210.00 Time Remaining: 6d 12h 57m Buy It Now for only: $210.00 |
 Beautiful High Grade GEM BU 1889 Morgan Silver Dollar Housed in a Custom Slab $300.00 Time Remaining: 6d 14h 3m Buy It Now for only: $300.00 |
 1893 P NEAR GEM BU+ HIGH GRADE SEMI KEY DATE MORGAN SIlver Dollar $1,695.95 Time Remaining: 7d 25m Buy It Now for only: $1,695.95 |
 1979 D GEM BU SBA DOLLAR High Grade $3.50 Time Remaining: 7d 1h 20m Buy It Now for only: $3.50 |
 1980 D GEM BU SBA DOLLAR High Grade $3.50 Time Remaining: 7d 1h 29m Buy It Now for only: $3.50 |
 1980 S GEM BU SBA DOLLAR High Grade $3.75 Time Remaining: 7d 1h 33m Buy It Now for only: $3.75 |
 PEACE 1 1927 S PCGS CERTIFIED MS 63 NICE FOR GRADE BLAST WHITE GEM LOW MINTAGE $375.00 Time Remaining: 7d 16h 26m Buy It Now for only: $425.00 |
 PEACE 1 1926 D PCGS CERTIFIED MS 64 NICE FOR GRADE BLAST WHITE GEM $275.00 Time Remaining: 7d 16h 38m Buy It Now for only: $315.00 |
 1898 O ANACS MS66 Morgan Silver 1 Dollar Gem Uncirculated BU High Grade Coin $400.00 Time Remaining: 7d 22h 46m Buy It Now for only: $400.00 |
 1981 S GEM BU SBA DOLLAR High Grade $8.75 Time Remaining: 8d 53m Buy It Now for only: $8.75 |
 1878 P 8 TF SILVER MORGAN DOLLAR GEM BU HI GRADE RARE KEY DATE US MINT $375.00 Time Remaining: 8d 17h 56m Buy It Now for only: $375.00 |
 1891 S MORGAN DOLLAR HIGH GRADE NEAR GEM QUALITY $60.00 Time Remaining: 8d 18h 31m Buy It Now for only: $72.00 |
 2009 P GEM BU SACAGAWEA DOLLAR SINGLE High Grade $3.75 Time Remaining: 9d 43m Buy It Now for only: $3.75 |
 1886 1MS64 PCGS Near GEM grade BLAZER $86.00 Time Remaining: 9d 5h 39m Buy It Now for only: $86.00 |
 1886 1MS65 PCGS GEM grade Great LUSTER $198.00 Time Remaining: 9d 6h 13m Buy It Now for only: $198.00 |
 1885 O Morgan Silver Dollar MS Gem Choice BU 1 UNC uncirculated Hi Grade Key US $83.60 Time Remaining: 9d 9h 20m Buy It Now for only: $83.60 |
 1971 Eisenhower Dollar Ike PCGS MS64 PQ for the Grade Near Gem Ike $32.00 Time Remaining: 9d 14h 1m Buy It Now for only: $32.00 |
 GORGEOUS 1888 SILVER MORGAN DOLLAR GRADING GEM BU a11 $110.00 Time Remaining: 9d 22h 5m Buy It Now for only: $110.00 |
 GORGEOUS 1889 SILVER MORGAN DOLLAR GRADING GEM BU a11 $125.00 Time Remaining: 9d 22h 8m Buy It Now for only: $125.00 |
 1923 P Peace Dollar Gem Frosty BU Rare Grade $146.25 Time Remaining: 10d 21h 19m Buy It Now for only: $146.25 |
 1883 1 Silver Morgan Dollar Gem BU PL High Grade Nice $184.95 Time Remaining: 11d 1h 24m Buy It Now for only: $184.95 |
 2010 D GEM BU SACAGAWEA DOLLAR SINGLE High Grade $4.00 Time Remaining: 11d 2h 24m Buy It Now for only: $4.00 |
 2007 P GEM BU SACAGAWEA DOLLAR SINGLE High Grade $4.00 Time Remaining: 11d 6h 23m Buy It Now for only: $4.00 |
 2007 D GEM BU SACAGAWEA DOLLAR SINGLE High Grade $4.00 Time Remaining: 11d 6h 23m Buy It Now for only: $4.00 |
 1977 IKE DOLLAR GEM BU + HIGH GRADES ROLL OF 20 $55.25 Time Remaining: 11d 17h 51m Buy It Now for only: $55.25 |
 1976 Type 1 IKE DOLLAR GEM BU + HIGH GRADES ROLL OF 20 $92.65 Time Remaining: 11d 17h 53m Buy It Now for only: $92.65 |
 1973 IKE DOLLAR GEM BU + HIGH GRADES HALF ROLL OF 10 $58.65 Time Remaining: 11d 17h 56m Buy It Now for only: $58.65 |
 1973 D IKE DOLLAR GEM BU + HIGH GRADES HALF ROLL OF 10 $58.65 Time Remaining: 11d 17h 57m Buy It Now for only: $58.65 |
 1973 D IKE DOLLAR GEM BU ALL HIGH GRADES HALF ROLL OF 10 $72.25 Time Remaining: 11d 17h 58m Buy It Now for only: $72.25 |
 1882 1 NGC MS 65 GEM GRADE 99 WHITE LUSTER $486.00 Time Remaining: 12d 14h 1m Buy It Now for only: $486.00 |
 1885 O MORGAN DOLLAR ORIGINAL ROLL OF 20 GEM BU WITH SOME HIGHER GRADES $930.75 Time Remaining: 13d 13h 10m Buy It Now for only: $930.75 |
 1892 O Morgan Dollar Rare Date High Grade Superb Gem Frosty Luster Sharp $1,087.50 Time Remaining: 14d 3h 4m Buy It Now for only: $1,087.50 |
 1902 O MORGAN DOLLAR VERY HIGH GRADE GEM $75.65 Time Remaining: 14d 12h 7m Buy It Now for only: $75.65 |
 1921 D MORGAN DOLLAR VERY HIGH GRADE GEM NEON TONED $169.15 Time Remaining: 14d 14h 36m Buy It Now for only: $169.15 |
 1921 MORGAN DOLLAR MID GRADE GEM PL $339.15 Time Remaining: 14d 14h 42m Buy It Now for only: $339.15 |
 1891 S MORGAN DOLLAR MID HIGH GRADE GEM $118.15 Time Remaining: 14d 14h 44m Buy It Now for only: $118.15 |
 1897 S MORGAN DOLLAR MID HIGH GRADE GEM $118.15 Time Remaining: 14d 14h 46m Buy It Now for only: $118.15 |
 1884 O MORGAN DOLLAR MID HIGH GRADE GEM NEON TONED $75.65 Time Remaining: 14d 14h 48m Buy It Now for only: $75.65 |
 5 HIGH GRADE MORGAN DOLLARS BU GEM BU 1879 1884 O 1891 1897 1900 O $260.00 Time Remaining: 15d 20h 24m Buy It Now for only: $260.00 |
 1974 IKE DOLLAR GEM BU + HIGH GRADES ROLL OF 20 $46.75 Time Remaining: 16d 11h 37m Buy It Now for only: $46.75 |
 1976 T 1 IKE DOLLAR GEM BU ALL HIGH GRADES ROLL OF 20 $126.65 Time Remaining: 16d 11h 40m Buy It Now for only: $126.65 |
 2010 P D HIGH GRADE GEM BU SET OF NATIVE AMERICAN 1 $4.99 Time Remaining: 16d 18h 28m Buy It Now for only: $4.99 |
 1981 S SBA DOLLAR GEM BU ROLL OF 20 PLUS HIGH GRADES $72.21 Time Remaining: 17d 17h Buy It Now for only: $72.21 |
 1981 D SBA DOLLAR GEM BU ROLL OF 20 ALL HIGH GRADES $84.96 Time Remaining: 17d 17h 2m Buy It Now for only: $84.96 |